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Alright, I have submitted an answer to your application and thus you are a part of our group. Congratulations.

I am from Poland myself and as such my native language is Polish. I also know fluent English which I learned in somewhat like four or five years by myself and Ancient Greek which I'm learning right now along with Modern Greek. Your English is really horrible. We'll try to work on that. I can actually help you with it.

I've read your post again and I found some small errors I must have missed. Please edit it again and paste version I give you this time.

Link to your post:

http://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=108246&pid=1446014#pid1446014

Revised version:
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[font=Agency FB][color=#ff4400][size=6][b]Name:[/b] Damion Drago
[b]Age:[/b] 32 years
[b]Height:[/b] 203 centimeters
[b]Weight:[/b] 113 kilograms
[b]Eyes:[/b] Greyish green
[b]Hair:[/b] Black, straight, short
[b]Vessel preferences:[/b] EVO B12 "Pytho" Colonial Bomber
[b]S.K.Y.P.3. Protocol ID:[/b] *ENCRYPTED*
[b]Biography:[/b] At the moment of this broadcast Damion Drago is 32 years of age, and he's currently living on the Planet Pecos for the last few weeks. He served the Colonial Ground Forces for the past 14 years as an officer in the 11th Paratroopers Squadron. Seeing our proud Nation in retreat was a hard thing to swallow and after many months in doubt Damion Drago decided that it was time for a change in his life. Taking the fight to the enemy in space instead of fighting defensively on the ground, especially since the years were passing for Drago and he couldn't keep up anymore with those young, but reckless 18 year old grunts. With the savings he gathered, he bought himself a brand new EVO B12 "Pytho" Colonial Bomber and named it proudly after one of the first Earthen Colonial ships "The Mayflower 2" which he now offers, with him as a pilot, to the 27th Assault Fleet. The Colonial officer who sold it to him tried to convince Drago that it was better to purchase a "Nyx" first, in fear that his flying skills are a bit rusty. He didn't argue, however, anymore when Damion tried to sit in the cockpit of a "Nyx"… his knees were bumping into all the buttons and he almost ejected himself into the roof of the hangar. Nothing is clearly known about current situation of Damion’s family, last contact he had with them was quite some time ago when the Colonial Nation was in full retreat and that was a brief transmission. His parents Manuel Drago (65) and Isabelle Drago-Sunflower (64) and his little sister Danielle (27) were on one of the many civillian vessels running for safety from the Gallic invasion, they didn't tell him what the destination or the ship's signature were. Guess the confusion during the retreat was greater than one could possibly imagine. Searching has come to no result so far but maybe the humanitarian aid groups had more luck than Drago by himself. Still, Damion is planning on going on a search mission into Gallic space some day, seeing they never arrived on Pecos or let alone any other station in Gallic-free space that he knows of.[/size][/color][/font]



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You are now to create a character named:

27th|Damion.Drago

It has to be a "Nyx" VHF (or "Eros" LF, but that's not a good idea RP wise it would seem). As I have written in your application reply we've prepared a "Nyx" that is suitable for your character's sizes. And if it goes for bomber, you can rename it later to match our naming convention or keep it independent and create another one. However this name of your bomber must be established with the leaders, so let's save it for later.

If you need money for your characters, their ships and equipment, I can provide you with a funding. If you need help getting money, I can also help you with that. If you have any questions about our faction, Discovery server in general, English, roleplaying, my characters or me, ask freely and I will be happy to help.

Also one more thing, which is Skype. Establish an account ASAP and provide me with it so you can be added to 27th AF Chat and to my list of contacts for future reference. You don't have to have a microphone. We actually use text chat via Skype and for voice chat we use Mumble. So... prep a Skype and give it to me.

And a question? What is your line of work that you coined the phrase NCO? For I found that a phrase "officer" without any additions or modifications will be more suitable in your applications and thus, I used it alomng with few other improvements.

Alright, that is all... for now.