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It made me wonder, who is the boy with red-hair? Yeah. And I didn’t seriously expect it was an alien. Haha! It surprised me a lot and made me speculate what to expect from the story. You have a great title.
External Forces: (10/10)
Your graphic poster was cute too. It was appropriate for the story. I love how simple you made your fonts, colors and layout looked like. I like the organization and neatness it has.
Foreword : (11/15)
Your description wasn’t that catchy as I expect it to be, but still it was good. And you did a pretty good job in explaining your characters for the readers to have some kind of a prior knowledge on how to expect.
Originality : (10/10)
I love the originality of this story. It also displays your great creativity of twisting some of your characters traits and makes your readers understand the emotions well. Imagination also comes in with the flow of your story which is really rare specialty for a writer to have.
Characterization : (10/10)
I started to fall in love with the characters. It sums up all my feelings. lol.
Plot/Flow of Story : (15/20)
Oh no! Taemin, don’t go! Ha ha. Okay, I’m one of your readers now. It’s obvious by the amount of readers you have that you seriously did a great job with the flow of the story. You have this invisible magnet that keeps your readers sticking. You made twists that surprises your readers and that definitely worked because we’re all hooked up!
Grammar / Spelling : (13/15)
I haven’t had any problems with your grammars or spelling. You engaged your writing skills so well. But sometimes, you’ve got some messy problems about passive voices and complex expressions but all throughout you did very well.
Author's Technique : (15/15)
It took me some time to catch up with the system you hold as a writer but then I later on found out that you like to tease. Every chapter makes your reader want more. It’s a very nice technique and a great way to catch the attention of many.
Final Score : (89/100)
Hoho. I need to thank you for making your chapters not too long! Haha! I was able to read it fast!
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