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Untuk plot kali ini, berikut sedikit koreksi dari saya:
1. [camping] tidak perlu diawali huruf kapital.
2. ["Jaketmu? Syal? Sudah kau bawa sayang?" tanya wanita paruh baya itu.] dalam kalimat tersebut, terkesan bahwa ibunya Keiko menanyakan apakah Keiko sudah membawa sesuatu bernama “sayang”. Maka agar tidak rancu, lebih tepat bila menggunakan koma. ["Jaketmu? Syal? Sudah kau bawa, sayang?" tanya wanita paruh baya itu.]
3. [Teriak wanita paruh baya itu -lagi-.] lebih tepat bila ditulis seperti ini: [teriak wanita paruh baya itu, lagi.]
Itu saja, secara keseluruhan penulisanmu sudah rapi. Narasinya pun mudah dipahami. Ayo, ditingkatkan lagi, ya! Selamat bersenang-senang.
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