Notes

Video Script Review
1. “Voice of Mirza Tahir Ahmad – Supreme Head of Ahmadiyya community (1982)” This on-screen text should continue throughout the time his voice is appearing in the video so that viewer can continuously relate to what is being told.
2. During the time Mirza Tahir’s voice is appearing in the video, it should be equally supported by his own pictures or pictures related to Ahmaddiya community so that the relationship of subject is stronger with both the audio and visual/video
3. Find some photos here. Ideally you should be buying/taking permissions from owners. You might also download and get them edited to avoid any copyright infringement issues: https://www.flickr.com/search/?q=mirza%20tahir%20ahmad
4. Subtitles are placed too below in the video which may hinder a viewer from actually reading them, because of controls, fingers, etc. So you should ideally place them at 1/5th or 1/4th of the screen so that they can be easily viewed.
5. You should add the reference to this interview that you are showing in your clip. Ideally you could get a single background designed for the time that you will be playing Mirza Tahir’s interview. Idea: It could be a singular backdrop with all the name, details of Mirza along with reference interview. Pictures could keep changing in the frame provided.
6. You should very necessarily add background voice to this video script and have a script written for that. This way you will be able to related all the clips that you have compiled in your video right now.
Sample background script is given below:
“While the false claims and absurdities associated with Ahmadi’s are nothing new for the Muslims, it is ironical to know that their deceptions and ridiculous fabrications are not just limited to the Muslim world. In the 1990s, during a flurry of media attention, Mirza boldly asserted that the esteemed 'A Life in Day of' series, renowned for its insightful profiles, had been renamed after him. Originating in the 1970s, this iconic series chronicled the lives of notable individuals, providing a window into their daily routines and inner workings. Mirza, being the known figure in his own right, seized upon the series' popularity to fabricate a tale of personal significance, blurring the lines between fantasy and reality.”
7. Name/reference of 2nd voice is missing. Is it the same voice? If so the previous and this one have a very large difference in sound quality and clarity and this MUST be looked into as it might wary away the audience and shake their confidence in the video message.
8. The third voice (US accent) seems to be from another video as well. References of the video and speaker or channel, should also appear as in-screen text
9. All separate voices should have corresponding names and details appearing as in-screen text and reference image or video
10. You do not need to provide your sources at the end of the video. When every reference/source will be appearing even briefly at the time it is being showed in the video, it will complete the formality and will also be useful, attractive and engaging for the viewer since they will trust that whatever is being showed to them in the video is trustworthy content supported by live references as and when they are appearing on the screen
11. 1 background script together with voice recording is highly recommended for this video!
12. Inclusion of better content: more relevant pictures and clips
13. Dates of interviews, specially the main interview and to whom it was given – such info is very importantly required to be included as text inside the video
14. Suitable Video Transitions could be applied depending on the software and expertise being used or hired. Similarly pictures can be made to zoom in/zoom out/glide to give a more lively feel to the video so that viewer doesn’t get bored.
15. The overall color gradient of the video should be made similar, if not uniform.
16. Where there are negative spaces in the video, they should be also filled with some relevant text so that full screen is utilized