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love the music at the beginning.
close up of bis creates eerie effect
the shot of her wandering is a bit far away/visually unclear
slowmotion walking adds to feeling of disoriented
how do the shots of her hands add to the theme?
consider making the music louder when she covers her ears
the shots of looking out the window and the clock add to a different theme than the beginning does -- beginning is lost, then it changes to lonely/impatient? try to make all the shots towards a same theme.
what does the shot of pipes add? consider deleting.
maybe a shot of feet going up the stairs instead of just the stairs
love how the shot at the end ties into the beginning (eyes closed and then open). it creates the theme of "lost and then found".
i like the black at the end but to be honest im not loving the photo you made of the brain and "disoriented"
basically just make sure all the shots are lining up to the theme of disorientated not another theme!! :)
try to make the music a little quieter/fade out at the end because the ending is kind of abrupt stop to the music.
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