Notes

1General
Step 1:study other fanfics in detail (aka read more pokemon fanfics and smuts)
What people like dont like .
Tropes that could fit into the stories.
Step 2:Read well written books close to the topic.
Step 3:Study writing aka study story structure
study story tropes
study the theory of writing
(helpful sites for step 3 Springhole.net
Mythcreants.com
ShaelinWrites on youtube
Tvtropes.com)
Step 4:Improve at writing aka synonyms
descriptions
Phrases and such
VOCABULARY IS IMPORTANT
Step 5:Once you know story structure outline your story the plotline and the major events.
Write out snipets of dialogue between the characters
Step 6:JUST WRITE.Its gonna be trash but just write and post it.Its scary it will be trash but youll get tips to improve your writing.

2 DIALOGUE
Tip 1:Avoid always having characters say everything theyre feeling .Show what the characters feel withhout having them outright say it.
Tip 1.2:Make characters speak in a way that alines with their personality and the way they think.And also change the way they speak based off their current emotions and what is going on at that moment.
Tip 2:Dont make them sound the same.Have them have slightly different vocabularies.And speak with different emotions.
Tip 3:Write down each characters personality and how they speak.Look at those notes and use them to understand how they would talk and react.
Tip 4:Dont overly describe it.Use only a few descriptions of how the characters are speaking or what they do like sighing and such.Keep it more fast paced.

3Description mistake
1.Dont rely on sight alone describe things with sound scent feelings .

4.Pet Peeves small tips for things to avoid
Lack of character development.
Lack of flaws.
Dont add fake tension if you want to add something that makes the scene or chapter tense or end on a cliffhanger make something happen make someone get injured die or otherwise have something BAD happen.
Dont dump worldbuilding create a world add rules add description of the world and then sprinkle it troughout the story.
Describe things well but DONT describe them with overly complicated words.Keep things simple yet very descriptive.
Keep characters in characters make them act how theyre supposed to.
Make the characters different dont have them all be the same.
Keep each character in a specific personality type to make it easier to know how they would act.
Dont overly describe unimportant things describe what matters.
Avoid the word "said" use ANY other word.Like blurted, mumbled ,gasped or such.