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Shihoo. Sebagai starter, saya bisa mengatakan narasimu cukup oke, walaupun ketika dibaca kebawah-bawah, masih ada kekontrasan antar kalimatnya. Dengan kata lain, ada saat dimana kamu menceritakan hal A, tiba-tiba di kalimat selanjutnya sudah membahas hal C. Namun terlepas dari itu, karena narasimu padat dan walaupun sedikit kurang to the point, saya tidak mengalami kesulitan untuk memahami apa yg menjadi maksudmu. Keep it up.
Untuk Clarissa, saya sempat kaget ketika membaca narasimu. Karena tiba-tiba saja kamu muncul dan membahas hal yg berbeda. Turns out kamu membawa konflik baru untuk cerita. Oke juga susunan pembalasan kalian, tidak konvensional seperti yg biasa saya lihat.
Dan terakhir, Olivia. Sebagai finishing, konklusimu cukup oke... Tapi, terpikirkah untuk sekalian merawat luka-luka kalian setelah sekalian menyelamatkan staff? XD
Anyway, good job for this mission. Can't thank you enough for that. Have nice days, folks. )
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