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3 + bonus 1 = 4 points, untuk perinciannya. Mengapa hanya 3? Karena koordinasi di dalam plot kalian masih kurang baik. Yang 1 menggambarkan situasi A, namun di bagian setelahnya ternyata situasi B. Masih timpang tindih dan membuat geleng-geleng kepala. Namun, di luar itu, kalian sudah menjalankan misi dengan baik mengikuti arahan untuk memilih salah satu saja. Good job!
Ingin mengkritisi tetapi dirasa belum ada yang perlu dikritisi, pembawaan karakter kalian masing-masing juga nampaknya sesuai (tidak tahu pasti untuk ini karena tidak ada di link profile kalian, hanya saja sesuai dari awal hingga akhir).
Tambahan sedikit untuk tanda baca. Penggunaan elipsis (tanda titik sebanyak 3 kali) tetap diberikan tambahan tanda baca lain apabila berada di akhir kalimat. Contoh:
"Tolong aku...." Rintihnya. Atau, "Tolong aku...," rintihnya.
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