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-drop overt alexandra lucas relationship. Keep it lowkey if i decide they had one. Make Lucas not awkward.
-rewrite chapter transitions and cool Lucas' temper somewhat. He gets a bit too angry currently.
-Lapis is moody, but not that moody. Tone it down
-Warper scene needs to come later
-edit early Lapis dialogue. Less malicious, more confused.
-let EMMA's personality shine through a bit more. Edit early dialogue. Give her some quirks.
-Lucas needs to change before and after ship crash. Maybe he was a bit chubby? Think of more ideas
-Interrogation scene should take place the day after
-Make Lucas less established
-Use jetpack again later
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