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* obvious improvement - a
*more attention to details - b
* clear relationship between the two - c
* concept well executed - d

Dramatique(sen): abcd
additional notes: In this new look, there's a lot more going on in terms of makeup, shoe combination, and pattern layering. Where the original outfit's details blended into each other, the details in this look stand out as a more unique spin-off of the original. The variety in colors serves this outfit well, and the overall composition of this outfit stands out as unique. The overall concept is executed well as this edgy villainess. A revival certainly took place in this outfit.

Heejin: abc
additional notes: The hair, makeup and jewelry are improved in this new outfit, and the new look clearly matches the original's reference better. The combination of mainly black patters with purple accents make the outfit seem more realistic, and the corset layering is done very well. The concept is decently executed, though I would've loved to see more risks taken in this reawakened outfit. Like, what really constitutes an "odd sister", what makes them odd? What features make them stand out from others, how is each sister different from each other in a way that can be expressed through clothing? Considering these questions might help bring more oomph into this outfit.

Cyn: bc
additional notes: The new outfit definitely has more going on, the combination of heels looks promising but is overshadowed and falls out of focus due to the skirt above it. The same black and red pattern is used throughout the look, and I think the look would've benefitted from a wider variety of patterns to make the details in the lower half more visible. In the upper half, the details on the corset and chest look great, and there are even accents of white and different patterns used. The rest of the outfit(sleeves, hair, shoes/skirt) would've been elevated if it had the same variety we saw on the corset and chest. The hair and makeup on the new look are pretty similar to the old look, but it would've been more exciting to deviate and create something a bit different. The original concept is an evil sorceress known for her shrieks, so some crazier makeup and hair would've fit better considering that.

Sevan Deadly: abcd
additional notes: The new outfit has elevated makeup, pattern choice and overall detail. The green and pink accents throughout this mainly purple outfit really make each piece stand out, and were a good choice considering the original outfit's concept of a fashionable fairy. One of the skirts however clip through each other in a weird way(specifically the rainbow VIP skirt), this could be fixed by making it a layer shorter so it stops where it needs to. The color choice on the headpieces and hair were well-thought out, each piece on the head stands out and flows nicely with the rest of the outfit. The puffy purple sleeve felt a little too big, perhaps a smaller puff would suffice since it currently takes a good amount of space in the outfit when it doesn't need to.

terrorbyte: abcd
additional notes: The hair and hairpieces are lovely additions to this outfit. There's obviously a lot more improvements in the new fit, and this reawakened fit perfectly captures both the concept and theme of the original. The skirt layering just seems right and the patterns used in this fit add just enough variety. This reawakened outfit seems regal and pays a great homage to the original and the traditional clothing referenced. The makeup is improved but could use a brighter highlight, and the bright red skirt would look better in the outfit if it was just a shade darker.

cloud: bcd
additional notes: Right from the first look, it's clear there's a lot more attention to detail put into this new look. There's an abundance of hair, subtle changes to the corset and the skirt in this outfit. The concept from the original seems to carry on in this reawakened fit - like a golden superhero. (I dont really have much to add beyond this, the outfit is fine.)

liussix: abcd
additional notes: This look is really unique, The combination of gold, black, and red all work well to make this look seem dark and brooding. The makeup and hair is a perfect combination of both looks, and the red accent throughout the new outfit seem purposeful. The shoes are very reminiscent of Roxy, and this concept of a golden withered Roxy is very true to the FNAF brand and is well executed in this recreation.

Mele: bcd
additional notes: The concept of a golden sunset is very evident in this outfit, and the overall composition of the skirts and color choice really enhances this reawakened outfit. This outfit seems like it would look amazing in the real world on a runway. The hair and makeup are phenomenal, each hair piece and hairstyle looks intentional and harmonious(it all comes together). There is a missed opportunity to have done something in terms of sleeves or the arm in general, as it's quite bare unlike the original. Since the original outfit's theme was gold, it would have been preferrable to see some more gold accents throughout the reawakened outfit just to keep it on theme like the original. Perhaps the arms, shoes, and nails would've been more exciting with these gold accents.

r2k: abcd
additional notes: The change in range and blend of colors was a perfect choice to make when remaking the old outfit. This new outfit is cleaner, crisper, and well-composed. The jewelry and pattern usage all make sense. With a side-by-side comparison to the original, it's quite clear which outfit is the reawakened version, as everything in this new fit expresses elegance. A few subtle accents of orange/gold would have elevated the look, since the species referenced in the original outfit is often seen with little orange horns. The silhouette of the new outfit is slightly different but still references the original, and the concept is well executed throughout.

Cil Star: abc
additional notes: The headpiece and the hair are stunning. The new fit has a more diverse range of colors, The patterns are purposeful and give the new outfit the same shine that the original outfit had. While the choice of patterns are great, their combination feels jumbled, especially regarding the skirts: the gold on the skirt clashes against the general blueness of the outfit. The sleeves on the outfit initially felt confusing but makes sense considering that the concept of this outfit is an underwater princess. The composition of the clothing is definitely reminiscent of the original and there is a lot of attention to detail, but the outfit could do with a little less. A few color changes or skirt removals would improve the outfit's harmony.

Sana: abc
additional notes: The makeup adds so much to the creepy atmosphere of the look, the deadpan eyes and blue tears were smart changes! I noticed that there is less jewelry on the new outfit which might be in order to make the outfit less focused on beauty and more on the withering aspect - which it does a great job at. The tear-away skirt, however, stands out in the new outfit. It glitches into the dior skirt in an unsubtle way, and the fit would've done better without it. - perhaps a better substitute would be a cape or the kitty skirt in the original. Finally, the general concept of the outfit - "withered blossom" could have been better represented in this new outfit. some more visible elements of flowers would help achieve this.

Goose: acd
additional notes: The hair is gorgeous, and it is a very beautiful representation of traditional geisha updo hairstyles. The change in patterns serves the outfit well, and the loss of read from the pattern change is made up well in the fit's red accents. The skirt layering positively adds to the outfit, and the amount of from the original shows is mirrored in this new outfit. While the white robe was a part of the original outfit, it was clashing there and is clashing as well in this new outfit. Clashing isn't always a bad thing - but the eye-catching parts of this outfit lie above it, so the robe would've served the fit better if it was in a black/darker pattern. The fox remake is true to the original, and the gap in details is made up in the makeup improvement and use of pattern layering to create texture.

OLD LOOK Baga tricks: b - NEW LOOK: The look is alright, I'd place it as safe
additional notes: The use of patterns throughout the fit draws attention to each detail in the outfit, and the color progression from top to bottom flows very well. The abundance of contrast in the outfit is a bit overwhelming for me, and I feel like the outfit kinda jumps from pattern to pattern in a confusing way. This reawakened outfit also isn't reminiscent of the original, which is alright, but the concept and details from the original seem to have been lost in this new outfit. For example, the horns and the staff remain, but the combination of clothes, color scheme, and overall composition look quite different. One element that is the same in both outfits though is the ambience, both fits seem magical, as if they're from a fantasy world.

Seinaide: abcd
additional notes: A lot of the original outfit's aspects were seen in this new fit and improved. The headpieces were similar, but the earmuffs and hair change make this new fit more unique to Seinaide. The use of patterns throughout the new fit is very purposeful, making everything seem candy-like and sweet, like a gingerbread man. Minor touch-ups to the clear stockings(the ones with ruffles) could improve that area of the outfit, perhaps making it red as well or a brighter white to blend less into the skin. The makeup changes are alright, the eye brightness seems a little too much but for a gingerbread cookie, it makes sense. The lip color could be a darker shade of red or a reddish-brown, as it stands out on the face and makes the nose almost disappear in the background. There is a lot more detail in the new fit, and the jewelry works well overall.

Sam/Silky: abcd
additional notes: The makeup and hair changes make a huge difference in this new outfit, and the entire upper body of the outfit has a lot of improvements and references to the original outfit. The difference in silhouettes from the original outfit to the new one seems intentional, and this reawakened fit adds a lot more. The color scheme is very consistent between both outfits, but this new outfit is missing some of the bright blue accents in the original. Additionally, given the very unique look of the mandarin dragonet, some other colors would've been a great addition to the look(for example, some orange accents here and there).

     
 
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