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hanksgiving for Kevin.Year 1 There once was a turkey named Kevin. It was a normal day but not for Kevin...It was Thanksgiving. Kevin was the Turkey the farmers were going to eat for Thanksgiving.Kevin ran over to his friend to help him so he does not get eaten.And his friend was Mr. Cow to help him.Mr.Cow said sure i will help you so they whet of to get his friend Chicken to help him.Kevin said will you help me not to get eaten by the Farmers kids and wife.Chicken said ok than the farmer came the cow and the Chicken when at the farmer the cow kid the farmer in the leg...SNAP!!!And the farmer did not get them... Year 2...The Farmer got better? Kevin was so mad that he got better and it was THANKSGIVING!Kevin was so scad he that he was going to die and his friend was not thaw so he hid he ran to the shed to hid but he was in the shed. Kevin was shock.The farmer to see what he's doing. .Kevin ran from the shed.Kevin was so not happy that it was Thanksgiving.Kevin whited to hide but he it was to late he hid Mr.Cow and Mr.Chicken got cot in the farm so he was alone he was running to the Farmers bed room to hide.The Farmer was in the bed room Keivin did not know what to do he ran under the bed.He did not no what to do he needs to get out of thaw so he ran as fast as he could go.He made it he could not believe it he was a life but don't get happy Kevin.The farmer was right behind him Kevin ran to the farm to warn his friends.Mr.Cow and Mr.Chicken.Kevin said Help me the Farmer is going to get me.Ok me and Chicken Will help you Kevin.So come i got a plan.Ok so it go"s like this so me and Chicken are going to charge him you run as fast as you can go out of the farm we will be right behind you Kevin GO GO GO Kevin !!!!!! GO GO GO Chicken I will be right behind lets run for it.Thay ran as fast as a car but the cow trip he got cot with Chicken. Help Help! Chicken and cow said Kevin came back to help us with the new guy it was Mr.Dog hes a good dog but he can sure bite hard.Farmer you mate what to ru nas fast as you can and not mess with Kevin Mr.cow Mr.Chicken Mr.dog.Oar elss you will pay the price of a hard hard hard bite to the both legs and both arms and you will not be happy at us so run and youer not eating Kevin for diner if you do we will birte youer body hard. Cow you can't he eat somthing else,They all thought Y you just what to eat Turkey???Then they were safe for now. Cow,Chicken,Kevin and Dog.Than thay life.

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Imagine you are a turkey at Thanksgiving time on a farm. Explain what it is like for you, how you plan to escape and avoid capture, and what happens to you (and your family) at the end. Where did you end up? Make sure your story includes a descriptive beginning, middle, and end.

Thanksgiving for Kevin.Year 1 There once was a turkey named Kevin. It was a normal day but not for Kevin...It was Thanksgiving. Kevin was the Turkey the farmers were going to eat for Thanksgiving.Kevin ran over to his friend to help him so he does not get eaten.And his friend was Mr. Cow to help him.Mr.Cow said sure i will help you so they whet of to get his friend Chicken to help him.Kevin said will you help me not to get eaten by the Farmers kids and wife.Chicken said yes I will help you Kevin than the farmer came the cow and the Chicken when at the farmer the cow kid the farmer in the leg...SNAP!!!And the farmer did not get them... Year 2...The Farmer got better? Kevin was so mad that he got better and it was THANKSGIVING!Kevin was so scad he that he was going to die and his friend was not thaw so he hid he ran to the shed to hid but he was in the shed. Kevin was shock.The farmer to see what he's doing. .Kevin ran from the shed.Kevin was so not happy that it was Thanksgiving.Kevin whited to hide but he it was to late he hid Mr.Cow and Mr.Chicken got cot in the farm so he was alone he was running to the Farmers bed room to hide.The Farmer was in the bed room Keivin did not know what to do he ran under the bed.He did not no what to do he needs to get out of thaw so he ran as fast as he could go.He made it he could not believe it he was a life but don't get happy Kevin.The farmer was right behind him Kevin ran to the farm to warn his friends.Mr.Cow and Mr.Chicken.Kevin said Help me the Farmer is going to get me.Ok me and Chicken Will help you Kevin.So come i got a plan.Ok so it go"s like this so me and Chicken are going to charge him you run as fast as you can go out of the farm we will be right behind you Kevin GO! GO! GO! Kevin !!!!!! GO! GO! GO! Chicken I will be right behind lets run for it.Thay ran as fast as a car but the cow trip he got cot with Chicken. Help Help! Chicken and cow said Kevin came back to help us with the new guy it was Mr.Dog hes a good dog but he can sure bite hard.Farmer you mate what to ru nas fast as you can and not mess with Kevin Mr.cow Mr.Chicken Mr.dog.Oar elss you will pay the price of a hard hard hard bite to the both legs and both arms and you will not be happy at us so run and youer not eating Kevin for diner if you do we will birte youer body hard. Cow you can't he eat somthing else,They all thought Y you just what to eat Turkey???Then they were safe for now. Cow,Chicken,Kevin and Dog.Than thay life.

Thanksgiving for Kevin.Year 1 There once was a turkey named Kevin. It was a normal day but not for Kevin...It was Thanksgiving. Kevin was the Turkey the farmers were going to eat for Thanksgiving.Kevin ran over to his friend to help him so he does not get eaten.And his friend was Mr. Cow to help him.Mr.Cow said sure i will help you so they whet of to get his friend Chicken to help him.Kevin said will you help me not to get eaten by the Farmers kids and wife.Chicken said yes I will help you Kevin than the farmer came the cow and the Chicken when at the farmer the cow kid the farmer in the leg...SNAP!!!And the farmer did not get them... Year 2...The Farmer got better? Kevin was so mad that he got better and it was THANKSGIVING!Kevin was so scad he that he was going to die and his friend was not thaw so he hid he ran to the shed to hid but he was in the shed. Kevin was shock.The farmer to see what he's doing. .Kevin ran from the shed.Kevin was so not happy that it was Thanksgiving.Kevin whited to hide but he it was to late he hid Mr.Cow and Mr.Chicken got cot in the farm so he was alone he was running to the Farmers bed room to hide.The Farmer was in the bed room Keivin did not know what to do he ran under the bed.He did not no what to do he needs to get out of thaw so he ran as fast as he could go.He made it he could not believe it he was a life but don't get happy Kevin.The farmer was right behind him Kevin ran to the farm to warn his friends.Mr.Cow and Mr.Chicken.Kevin said Help me the Farmer is going to get me.Ok me and Chicken Will help you Kevin.So come i got a plan.Ok so it go"s like this so me and Chicken are going to charge him you run as fast as you can go out of the farm we will be right behind you Kevin GO! GO! GO! Kevin !!!!!! GO! GO! GO! Chicken I will be right behind lets run for it.Thay ran as fast as a car but the cow trip he got cot with Chicken. Help Help! Chicken and cow said Kevin came back to help us with the new guy it was Mr.Dog hes a good dog but he can sure bite hard.Farmer you mate what to ru nas fast as you can and not mess with Kevin Mr.cow Mr.Chicken Mr.dog.Oar elss you will pay the price of a hard hard hard bite to the both legs and both arms and you will not be happy at us so run and youer not eating Kevin for diner if you do we will birte youer body hard. Cow you can't he eat somthing else,They all thought Y you just what to eat Turkey???Then they were safe for now. Cow,Chicken,Kevin and Dog.Than thay life.

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