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I disagree with the issue of allowing BTS to be exempt from military service, just because it has a huge impact on South Korea's economy. This is not a valid reason for them to be excluded from joining the military, it would be unfair to other men who sacrificed their education and career just for military service. Idols are not exempt from Korea's requirement that all male citizens serve in the military unless they have a valid reason. Additionally the other celebrities and other idols joined the military, so that BTS have to comply too in military services because that's the law '




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The topic that we encountered was, About the kpop stars in korea namely BTS, they allowed not to comply in military services, when south korea passed the law some people are debating whether BTS should comply or not in military services, but for others they rejected this law, because it literally not fair for others, based on my study and research military service is a contentious issue in South Korea. A poll released last month by local news outlet E-Today showed some 53% of respondents supported special treatment for BTS, while 47% opposed it and i can say that we disagree for that decision. All men are required to enlist and must serve in approximately 2 years.

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I disagree with the issue of allowing BTS to be exempt from military service, simply because it has a huge impact on the South Korean economy. This is not a valid reason for them not to join the military, it would be unfair to other men who sacrificed their education and career just for military service. Additionally other celebrities and other idols have also joined the military, so BTS must also comply with military service to because that is the law. Even though they are kpop megastars, this cannot be an excuse for them not to follow the military service like their fellow men.
Some may say that they are allowed to not comply with the military services, because of their ability to develop the Korean economy through their talent, in fact they are one of the reasons why the economy continues to rise of south korea. But for me allowing them to not comply with military service is not fair for others, everyone should follow the law .






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