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-at last frame of Here We Go :D when its the biggest, move it to the right a bit to center
-jumping down at 0:19-0:21 still looks weird to me idk why..
-previous spray and 0:35-0:39 are too spread apart (i dont like this clip, replace it pls)
-0:58 AK kill looks weird because its so far from long where you got the triple. (idk how to fix that) (worst case scenario keep, or remove the ak)
-Find a way to make the new clip clear at 1:10 (awps are too alike, and in the same area on the map)
-1:22-1:28 stall - felt kind of long, and dragged out.
-Ahhh at 1:30 is badly done. (i'll try my hand at it)
-1:28-1:30 is too quick of a cut, progression wise
-remove bhopping
-Find more arcade-ey creative transitions to separate clips that look too similar a bit more. Right now its a bit hard to distinguish between a new clip, or a same clip. (ie, AWPs towards end, and Mirage pistol mids) | Cinematics, and third person kill cam things can be quite good for transitions.
Goods:
-0:27-0:30 cinematic was great
-0:46-0:53 was very nicely done, edited, paced
-1:15 third person view kill cam thing was very nice (same at 1:34-1:35)
-nice outro
-Majority of the clips, with exception of the M4 on inferno are relatively nice. (Second worst clip might be either the first USP clip because of the jumping down part. -OR- 0:54-1:01 because of awkward, long distance cut.)
TAKE YOUR TIME TO GET GOOD CLIPS!!!!!!
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