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1. @kriyejtal
A: "Permisi @kriyejtal bisakah anda mengomentari kisah hidup saya?" Katanya tersenyun memberikan map https://t.co/e7sHhN9o24
K: bagus. But too short i think
(Link : https://twitter.com/kriyejtal/status/661436133654421504 )
2.@kimsoo__
A: "Permisi @kimsoo__ bisakah anda mengomentari kisah hidup saya?" Katanya tersenyun memberikan map https://t.co/e7sHhN9o24
K: "ah .. Orangnya setia kawan sekali ya. Mm .. Bagus kok bsnya rapih ^^"
(Link : https://twitter.com/kimsoo__/status/661477139250704385 )
3. @gfseunha_
A: "Permisi @gfseunha_ bisakah anda mengomentari kisah hidup saya?" Katanya tersenyun memberikan map https://t.co/e7sHhN9o24
E: Ia menerima lembaran yang diberikan @DOD_Athalia dan membacanya. "Sudah bagus, namun ada beberapa kalimat yang kurang efektif" ujarnya.
(Link : https://twitter.com/gfseunha_/status/661489886139052032 )
4.@eibraab
A: "Permisi @eibraab bisakah anda mengomentari kisah hidup saya?" Katanya tersenyun memberikan map https://t.co/e7sHhN9o24
J: sedih sekali, sampai saya air mata saya tidak berhenti mengalir 8(
keren dan saya suka.
(Link: https://twitter.com/eibraab/status/661491246259564544 )
5. @BD_Hyunseung89
A: @BD_hyunseung89 "bisakah anda mengomentari kisah hidup saya?" Katanya tersenyum memberikan sebuah map https://t.co/e7sHhN9o24
H: keseluruhan sudah bagus dan benar benar mengacu ke sebuah backgroud story. tapi mohon di tekannya lagi pada alurnya.
(Link: https://twitter.com/BD_hyunseung89/status/661493186490032128 )
Wynegard
•Murid AH
@ohdxlt
A: Ia melangkah menuju @ohdxlt dan mendekatinya.
"Permisi, bisa beri tanggapan tentang kisah saya?" Ia memberikan map
https://t.co/e7sHhN9o24
O: "Ah, too afraid to fall in love...kisahnya lumayan, wish your dream come true," dia tersenyum.
(Link : https://twitter.com/ohdxlt/status/661437529967558656 )
•Murid DSP
@Kmjngiin_
A: Ia melangkah menuju @kmjngiin_ "Permisi, bisakah anda mengomentari kisah hidup saya?" Katanya memberikan map
https://t.co/e7sHhN9o24
K: Menerima map dari @DOD_Athalia dan membacanya "Bagus...!"
(Link: https://twitter.com/kmjngiin_/status/661495956530003968 )
•Prof/Sen
1. @ProfsViolita
A: "Permisi @ProfsViolita bisakah anda mengomentari kisah hidup saya?" Katanya tersenyum memberikan sebuah map https://t.co/e7sHhN9o24
P: kisah hidupmu bagus nak, tapi tunjukin dikit kejelekannya /woi/ saya suka dibagian bagian 'saya suka sendiri. Saya tidak mau merusak pertemanan hanya karena cinta dan saya bukan seorang php'(?)
(Link: https://twitter.com/ProfsViolita/status/661491934943248384 )
2. @ProfsIlana
A: Ia melangkah menuju @ProfsIlana .
"Permisi, bisa beri tanggapan tentang kisah saya?" Ia memberikan map
https://t.co/e7sHhN9o24
P: Ia menerima map yang diberikan @DOD_Athalia dan membacanya.
"Sudah cukup bagus, namun ada beberapa kalimat yang masih kurang efektif"
(Link: https://twitter.com/ProfsIlana/status/661509293955395584 )
3. @Harusensei_
A: Ia melangkah menuju @harusensei_
"Permisi, bisa beri tanggapan tentang kisah saya?" Ia memberikan map
https://t.co/e7sHhN9o24
H: ada yang typo. Overall, bagus tapi susah dimengerti/? Mungkin karena saya kurang pinter bahasa inggris kali...
(Link:https://twitter.com/harusensei_/status/661534606135394304 )
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