Notes

Sunkit is introduced as a sweet, sensitive kit
{Remember quote, I was innocent once}

Sunkit is slowly getting ignored and forgotten about; Sunkit leaves camp
{Make it painful}

During apprenticeship, Sunkit left camp secretly and when he returns his brothers are being turned into apprentices and nobody remembered him.
{Super painful. Explain his heart and his thoughts in his head}

Heartbroken, the newly appointed, Sunpaw sulks himself to sleep and wakes up in the dark forest; where he then meets Sparkpaw, {who was also made an apprentice} {He is attracted to Sparkpaw, something about her brings him hope and light}

Sparkpaw is also overlooked and they easily click. {Give Sparkpaw a chapter to herself, explaining.}

They train together and become friends. {Keep in mind Sunpaw is still being forgotten and overlooked} {Also, make the dark forest bloody}

Soon, Sparkpaw quits the dark forest, trying to bring Sunpaw. He rejects, wanting to stay and show ThunderClan he's strong too
{He's done with getting ignored, he's determined}

Sunpaw is devoted to becoming strong and one night him and Sparkpaw are out together during night and he confesses love for her.
{Make the scene beautiful and elegant}
{Then near the end, make Sunpaw rethink becoming evil. He's torn}

Sparkpaw and Sunpaw start hanging out more and chatting together. Sunpaw's brother, Nettlepaw, notices and becomes jealous.
{Include how Nettlepaw always thought Sparkpaw was the prettiest and had a deep crush on her}

Nettlepaw starts bullying Sunpaw to the extent where Sunpaw kills him in hatred.
{Make this scene as gruesome as ever! Blood!}

Sunpaw cries heavily, but Sparkpaw is there to comfort him. She is his light.
{Make this scene incredibly sad, then change the mood to hopeful}

{Very end}
Sparkpaw wants to show Sunpaw something. They sneak out and she leads him to this hill and the sun is setting. They then talk about each other and their relationship. Sunpaw finally decides he wants to spend the rest of his life with the she-cat, no matter how torn apart it gets. Sparkpaw then knows, he has a good heart after all.