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Wah.. melepaskan dunia kedokterannya ya? Menarik..
Kamu bisa mengembangkan basic ini agar lebih menarik lagi nantinya ^-^
Saya tidak mengoreksi banyak, karena dari cara plot dan juga penggunaan diksi sudah baik.
Hanya yang mau saya koreksi adalah perihal kaliamat di dalam tanda petik. Saat menggunakan tanda petik jangan lupakan tanda bacanya juga ya ^^
Saya kutip salah satu bagiannya.
- kerja kerasmu untuk masuk ke fakultas kedokteran untuk mengejar sesuatu yang tidak berguna" Ellena mengatupkan bibirnya menahan emosi -
Setelah kata berguna bisa ditambahkan tanda titik. Atau bila ingin melanjutkan kalimatnya bisa digunakan tanda koma.
Itu saja mungkin untuk koreksinya, selebihnya saya suka pembawaannya. Tetap semangat plot yaa ~
Have a nice day!!!!
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