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Satu kata muncul di benak saya ketika membaca plot kalian: religius. Cukup ironis ya? Padahal Royale adalah kota yang dianggap 'kotor', tapi ternyata masih ada warganya yang taat beragama.
Jujur saja, plotnya agak monoton. Suasananya pun lebih banyak mengingatkan saya kepada iklan-iklan bulan Ramadhan di saluran TV Indonesia. Tapi bukan masalah. Plot seperti ini bagai angin segar. Sisi Arab kota Royale ditonjolkan dalam keislaman yang ada di plot kalian. Deskripsinya pun kental dengan nuansa Lebaran.
Saran untuk plot ke depannya, perhatikan kesinambungan antara reply orang yang satu dengan yang lain. Jika ingin plot lebih enak dibaca, usahakan tidak mengulang adegan yang telah dideskripsikan orang yang sebelumnya atau dua giliran sebelumnya. Jika dilakukan, apalagi sampai berulang kali, bisa-bisa plot terkesan bertele-tele.
Sedikit koreksi untuk tata bahasa. Biasakan menulis dengan aturan yang benar. Kata depan 'di' harus dipisah dari kata keterangan yang mengikutinya, contohnya 'di mana', 'di sini'. Perhatikan juga tanda baca dan penulisan kalimat langsung yang benar.
Sekian, lanjutkan!
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