Notes

IVE WRITTEN THIS COMMENT ALREADY BUT IT GOT DELETED BY ACCIDENT, SO IMMA SPEEDRUN AND WRITE IT AGAIN JUST CAUSE I WANNA LET YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVED IT

First off, I wanna say just how amazing your shading is, you are so so skilled it blows my mind
The scene where tommy stands at the edge of the innit hotel and looks at the prison, I can't get over when all the weapons flashed through his hands, that was so well done
THEN?? TUBBO WITH THE RED HORN AND SCARS???????? THAT WAS INCREDIBLE

The light moving on tommy's shoe and 1:04 is so so good, I lost my mind at that and replayed it like four times sdkfjhg
BUT THEN?????? THE HAND AT 1:09?? NOT ONLY FINGERS UNFOLDING SLIGHTLY BUT ALSO THE HAND TURNED?? THAT WAS SO SMOOTH DUDE OH MY GOD
And I let out the loudest fucking gasp at 1:15, PLUS THE BASE DROP WHICH JUST. FIT SO WELL. YOU TIMED EVERYTHING SO WELL SDLFJHKGS

I also really really like the way you used some of their lines, like tommy calling for sam, that plus dream appearing behind him made the scene so so good

AND TALKING ABOUT DREAM, THAT PUNCH, OH MY GOD. THE SMOOTHNESS OF IT. HOW HE GRABBED TOMMY AGAINST THE WALL, SO SO SO WELL ANIMATED
And at 2:03, that light was beautiful

Then at 2:13, I fucking LOST MY MIND AT THAT. THE HAND!! ITS HIS HAND!!! KJLQHGJKWJHLKDJK?L?>Q?!Q>!?
THE LITTLE FUCKING SMIRK HE DOES. AAAAA DUDE SO GOOD

Sam nook's part completely fucking broke me though, not only is it SO SAD, and the shading is so gorgeous, BUT THAT PERSPECTIVE AS WELL?? THE SILHOUETTE, ITS ALL SO WELL DONE, THE SKY MOVING BEHIND HIM, THE SLIGHT REFELCTIVENESS OF THE VEST DURING THE RAIN, INCREDIBLE

The scene of tubbo playing with michael and then cutting to him sobbing, I replayed that like six times or something. Just something about that pose was so good, him curled up with his hands over his head like that

THEN. TOMMY COMING BACK. OH MY GOD. THAT HAND REACHING UP, THE FINGERS FOLDING DOWN, DREAM'S VOICE, IT ALL FIT SO WELL.
And then when tommy reacted, _*his eye OPENING LIKE THAT,*_ that was probably my favorite part of this all. That expression was JUST SO PERFECT

And when he left the prison, at 3:45, that light and shading is so incredibly gorgeous, oh my god.
The way you painted his black eye as well was so so well done. It feels a little strange to call a literal bloody black eye gorgeous, BUT IT SERIOSLY IS WITH THE WAY YOU PAINT IT

Then the red banquet scene, puffy's expression broke my heart. You are seriously SO SO good at expressions, even the poses themselves are expressive, I look up to you so so much for how skilled you are!!

AND THE WAY YOU DREW GHOSTBUR. I WANNA FUCKING SOB. HE LOOKED SO HAPPY, AND THEN THOSE BLUE TEARS, EVERYTHING IS PAIN

This might be really specific, but the texture you add to your art is just gorgeous as well. Like the little shading at ghostbur's nose and cheek or dream's slight beard at 4:30, so so so so good

THEN 4:42. YOUR USE OF LIGHT DUDE, YOUR USE OF LIGHT. ITS SO FITTING AND JUST MAKES EVERYTHING BETTER. The light hitting benchtrio when running, them and wilbur backlit against the sky, SO GOOD I LITERALLY KEEP SAYING SO GOOD TO EVERYTHING BUT ITS SO TRUE IT IS

Your audio as well was so well done, the way the music faded and then the voices, THIS WAS SO AMAZING

I FEEL LIKE I DONT HAVE THE RIGHT WORDS TO SAY IT, LIKE I ONLY KNOW SO MANY POSITIVE ADGETIVES SKFLJHSDG
But seriously, your hard work REALLY SHOWS!!! The quality and detail in this is mind blowing, you are and incredibly skilled artist, this was fantastic