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- why is it so unique to me, why is it so hard
- talk too much positive so you need to add more context
- think about adding Chinese, ethnicity incorporation.
- feel a little gap between really young to elementary school
First paragraph(setting context, but important)(hints at what I was thinking, adding my own thoughts(can add questions that led to my way of thinking, why was it like it, i must try harder, miss them but i still appreciate them)
- what was it like living with them
- how they take care of you
- expand how I spent my time with them on the weekends(in another state)
- specific moment, saturday pick up, drop me off
second paragraph
- tie first to second, why did I spend so much time in CPC, parents were busy so I was there, how I felt, and how I feel about it now and appreciate it, blessing in disguise
- mostly informational, include anecdote if you can
- applied but not strong, what was it like to go there
- show how was it like, show a little bit more about my experience
third paragraph
- not a transition, why am I talking about this
- why everything, why my mom took me to all those classes, specifically each class(unless its unimportant)
- narrative for each thing
- didn't get to see them on the weekends that much because of all these lessons, they valued my time more than their need to be with me
fourth
- pin ying for specific
fifth paragraph more academic based
general
find where I paraphrase and turn that into live action
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