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-blend quotations into sentences, using them as evidence: One of the most basic
parts of her nature to seek perfection and to believe that flawlessness must exist for her,
and despite her acknowledgements that, as she said, “My perfectionism puts me at a
disadvantage,” battling her perfectionism is an ongoing problem.
-doesn't have to have a happy ending, almost feels forced
-General beginning, applies to anyone's struggle
-Gets into main point by the second sentence
SONIA (worried about big introduction before struggle)
-cliché beginning
-The flexible schedule allowed her to sleep in, and “It was a good bonding experience with [her parents}.” (unnecessary quote, can be paraphrased)
-good use of quotations, uses humor- As she mentioned, “Nobody knew what to think of the weird, new girl… they thought maybe I belonged to some church cult or had crazy parents.”
-Struggle is not extremely specific, is she struggling with moving? switching schools? Being home-schooled?
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