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Criminal Love
By Antonio Ramon Linner Gomez
Born 2000, M, from San Jose, Costa Rica
Published: 08/11/2015

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Jessie was a rather handsome man with his well built figure, brown eyes and brown short curly hair. One night as he walked out the door of the downtown bar, he suddenly heard a noise down an alley. As he came closer to the sound, he gasped at the scene. There was a man with a black hood strangling someone. As soon as the victim took his last breath, the hooded man took a glance at Jessie and started walking his way. Suddenly he noticed someone behind him, but when he started turning around, his eyes went black.

Jessie started to open his eyes when he felt a massive pain on the side of his head. He grunted and realized he had a black bag on his head.

"Get me out of here!" Yelled Jessie
"Shut up!" A man beside him yelled and he felt a sudden pain in his eye.

After grunting because of the pain he sensed movement in front of him and started squinting his eyes because of the bag being ripped off his head. He was in a dark room with 5 men surrounding him. The sudden squeaking sound of the door opening caught his attention. In came 3 men but only 1 had caught Jessie's attention. He was a tall, muscular and intimidating man. He had black hair, black clothes and grey piercing eyes. But what had Jessie even more intrigued was his ear, that had a missing piece that made it seem as if someone had shot him.

As the mystery man saw Jessie, something in the first man had changed. The mystery man didn't know why but he felt a sudden pull towards Jessie.

"Take him to my office" he said.


-1 month later-


Jessie had been offered a job as the mystery man's assistant. He had been informed of him being Roberto "El Diablillo" Quesada, America's most wanted drug dealer. Knowing that, he took up on the job offer. Robert had constantly been trying to hang out even more with Jessie. Jessie didn't really get it but let it slip.

One day as he walked down the street he saw someone following him. He went into an alley trying to outrun him but failed miserably as he saw the man wasn't alone.

"We know who you are. We're here to make you an offer Jessie Williams" the man spoke while circling around him.
"What kind of offer?"
"The kind that if you don't accept, will obligate us to kill you" the man paused before saying "We need you to kill "El Diablillo"
"What do I get out of it?"
"Protection and 1 billion dollars"
"How do you expect me to do that?"
"You'll have to figure that one out yourself. You have until the end of the day to do it"


Jessie went into Roberto's office. As soon as he looked up Roberto smiled. Jessie hesitated before taking the gun out of his pocket.

"I'm sorry Roberto" he said as he pulled the trigger.
As Jessie approached him, he heard him whisper.

"I love you"

As soon as Jessie heard that he pulled Roberto to his chest and started crying because he finally figured out that he loved him too. He grabbed the gun and put it on his temple. And he finally said...

"I love you too" as he once again pulled the trigger.