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In school I have extra responsibilities of being in charge of my houses Year 11, as well as being head of charity for my house too and this is one of my personal interests as I have worked with many charities and shops including St peters hospice as helping people who are are in need is very important to me. Working with these charities has also been in relation with my DofE qualifications - i achieved my Bronze Duke of Edinburgh award last year and i am now enrolled in Silver and interested in doing Gold DofE too. Also, through the last five years i have had piano lessons which, i have done outside of school and is a keen hobby of mine. (122)

I have chosen my specific courses that are more scientific based due to my love of the subject Biology and my interest of wanting to go into Forensic science blood specifically a blood spatter analysis and maybe into teacher in a later stage.
The science subjects i have chosen because they bring me a huge sense of interest and wanting to know more: the thought of mystery and that every work day would be different and wacky is very compelling to me. (82)

I would love to join BGS, as it is such a prestigious school that i feel like can give me the best opportunities and chances at getting me with the best universities and jobs as well as challenging me to my limits and showing what i can really achieve.
I attended your sixth form opening evening, and was amazed at the opportunities at what you have given to your students and what they have achieved and how BGS has been presented and I feel this is a sixth form I can give 110% to and I look forward to the chance to spend my next two years here if the chance arrives. (112)