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1. The video has too many shots of our Chinese coworkers and not have enough authentic Danish feel, could we cut out some shots with Chinese coworkers and replace with more shots of Danish guests in them?
2. Starting scenery: We think we can leave out the shot of the riverside and the shot of the horse carriage in them. (So after the little mermaid cut straight to the Danish flag shot)
3. The shot with the poster should be moved to after the "big reveal", so the storyline is more coherent.
4. Can we replace the shot after the poster of Chinese audience walking around with the shot of Danish mothers walking into the venue with their babies?
5. The "big reveal" scene is not quite the same as in the script. As in the script, we want to add a seperate shot with just the words "What did they see?" over a white screen, then the white screen splits open in the middle to reveal the paintings. And as the paintings appear, we can show the title of the exhibition "Babies' Poo-poo Can Speak" laid out in front of the paintings. (similar to how "Rahbek Media" is displayed in this video)
6. The shot with taking off the curtain to reveal the big wall of painting can be left out, instead we just cut to the shots with close-up of the paintings to create more an exhibition feeling rather than like a ceremony.
7. Can we add more still shots of close-up of paintings, not moving, as part of the "big reveal" scene?
8. Can we start the voiceover from the artist a bit earlier in the video, when the artist first appears in the video? (so not to have a big gap between the big reveal and the artist explanation)
9. As I know subtitles are not added yet, for the next draft, can we have the English subtitles as well? Also we might need to add some titles when the speaker appears (e.g. Artist Lea Leten, Wellingo Representative Caroline Plovgaard, etc.)
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